The essay was returned from the professor. According to her comment, I should state the topic sentences strongly and clearly especially in subject-object relationship. Probably my sentence do not say the subject clearly first, then the reader will have a problem where to land as the object. And composing strong topic sentence requires to choose the right verb in there. Her comment put me in the writing chaos again, but it made me be aware of my weakness.
Tough, tough, tough.
Tough, tough, tough.
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